Re-order of sequence

As I said previously, we were recommended to edit the order of our sequence so that we could increase the tension of the audience whilst they watch it. The piece was structured very methodically and we had not really thought about how to make it effective in a certain order so we took on the advice and improved it. As the POV shot went up the stairs we decided to include the shots of Olivia being restless and little shots of the dream immediately after so that it was more of a progressive journey to her room for the antagonist. This meant that we had to jump to different scenes but we did not mind this as we fully understood that it would be much more effective in the long run. It took a while to re order it all and so we took turns in doing so. Beth began by re arrange the raw order by splitting up the POV shot to the bedroom. Eboni then followed this up with little bits of Olivia in her bed being agitated so that the audience would be aware that she is having this dream. I then re ordered the bits of the dream within this so it is clear of the events that she is experiencing. After making this re-arrangement we were much happier with our piece.