Feedback for sequence/ Editing our footage 6

In today's lesson, my group was given this sheet of feedback from Miss. She had looked at a draft of our sequence in the last lesson that we had before half term and come up with some constructive feedback which we are going to use in order for piece to achieve the best mark possible. Here is the list that we were given:

Firstly, we looked at the pace on the POV shot going up the stairs at it occurred to us that it did need speeding up and so we used the 'fast forward' effect to speed this along so the audience are not made to wait during this point in the sequence. We also looked at the tracking shot and we are still in debate as to whether we will be able to film more to make this clearer and more effective by shooting a POV shot from under the bed or to cut out this clip. I have restructured the main body of the sequence along with Beth and Eboni to create this enigma and we have made the swing scene more of a flash up to extend this idea.